KidFors story, part 2

As it says in the title. Though this is all still first draft, and I know I need to change at least one thing in the first part.

( Story beyond, last bit's probably incoherent, being written all of five minutes ago and spellchecked once. )

I'll try and finish it tomorrow and update this then with the end. There's only a little bit to go, but I'm gonna go fall over now.